Wednesday, March 3, 2010

Areas for Improvement

6 comments:

  1. You need more information for your 1st and 2nd influence.

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  2. Though, you did very will on your biography with information you could have added some in the fun fucts area.

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  3. I agree with Shayla more fun facts would be good.

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  5. I don't know if it posted but I thought that there were lots of quotes, so maybe you could have paraphrased a little more.

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  6. I thought your blog was great and very well done. I wouldn't change anything. Good job!

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